Tanka #2 & #3

teacher lectures on

student ponders all he says

sculptor with a stone

sculptor’s error mars the stone

what will become of his work?


teacher lectures

student shaped—

sculptor’s stone

error mars stone

crumbles or endures?

Two offerings, one using the 5-7-5-7-7 and the second a shortened format.

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