Haiku #83, #84, #85, #86, #87, #88, #89, #90

keystone of the week

day of rest and hope renewed

cross and crown unite

sun breaking through clouds

ancient plan rehearsed

prayer and praise entwine as one

heaven meets the earth

bridge over river

saints in windows speak

colors play across the floor

words for those who hear

songbirds far off sing

table set for all

heavenly feast there arrayed

come and celebrate

door in garden wall

I have been experimenting with the idea showing versus telling in haiku. In the four haiku above I have closed each with a final telling phrase and then a showing phrase. Please let me know what you think or prefer or whatever!

Written for Haiku Heights, #295

Prompt: Sunday


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